Things found while editing so far. I’ve change the name of the earth based magic three times. Characters knowing things before it’s revealed in the story. Apparently, I’ve waffled on the main character’s hometown throughout the book. 😞

Things found while editing so far. I’ve change the name of the earth based magic three times. Characters knowing things before it’s revealed in the story. Apparently, I’ve waffled on the main character’s hometown throughout the book. 😞